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 Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2017 12:14 am Post subject: New instrumental I'm working on |
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https://soundcloud.com/2doperecords/ocd/s-KS5Db
Still needs mad work, but it's got some crazy vibes.
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BreakinGods
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Its definitely different. Friend said he needs to teach me some things about frequencies... hopefully it will be helpful.
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| Sounds good. The only thing I can really give criticism on is I feel there are too many (kick drums?) between 1:15-1:22, especially at around 1:21. |
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BreakinGods
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| HackOtaku wrote: | | Sounds good. The only thing I can really give criticism on is I feel there are too many (kick drums?) between 1:15-1:22, especially at around 1:21. |
Yeah the kick pattern definitely needs some work to make verses flow better.
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| BreakinGods wrote: | | HackOtaku wrote: | | Sounds good. The only thing I can really give criticism on is I feel there are too many (kick drums?) between 1:15-1:22, especially at around 1:21. |
Yeah the kick pattern definitely needs some work to make verses flow better. |
Wasn't even thinking about that, but yeah. Just sounds like it's hitting too many times and I can't figure out the rhythm for it, but it's just that part. Rest sounds good, the opening made me think of a smart phone commercial for some reason. |
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BreakinGods
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| HackOtaku wrote: | | BreakinGods wrote: | | HackOtaku wrote: | | Sounds good. The only thing I can really give criticism on is I feel there are too many (kick drums?) between 1:15-1:22, especially at around 1:21. |
Yeah the kick pattern definitely needs some work to make verses flow better. |
Wasn't even thinking about that, but yeah. Just sounds like it's hitting too many times and I can't figure out the rhythm for it, but it's just that part. Rest sounds good, the opening made me think of a smart phone commercial for some reason. |
My friend said the same kinda think about the kicks. Going to remove a few and see where I absolutely need them. The problem could be the kicks that are on 2s and 4s instead of 1s and 3s in a four beat pattern.
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