Posted: Sun Dec 22, 2013 6:42 pm Post subject: Phoenix Solar Wind Commision WIP
so I'm doing this commision work
any crits? things you think are off place maybe?
The drawing on the left is the main reference from the client.
others are just reference to help me on certain parts of the drawing
Posted: Wed Dec 25, 2013 12:58 pm Post subject: Re: Phoenix Solar Wind Commision WIP
gogodr wrote:
things you think are off place maybe?
The claw/magatama-like things hanging from the wings and tail rub me the wrong way. To me claws/pointy bits only make sense if you can apply some force on them to damage an opponent, but like that on the end if a wire it's only going to be (somewhat) useful if you flail them into your target which seems unlikely.
If you want to put some tracers like on the rightmost picture, why not, but personally I'd prefer them without combat-related objects at their end. Otherwise my logic will kick in again.
Also, it'll probably go off once you put the color, but at first I thought those BS disks were the ends of severed limbs, then I noticed bones had weird different shapes. _________________
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