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Aviar³ Grandmaster Cheater Reputation: 50
Joined: 03 Jan 2008 Posts: 655 Location: Canada
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Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2011 10:33 pm Post subject: |
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Reporter wrote: | Aviar³ wrote: | Aviar³ wrote: | Reporter wrote: | Aviar³ wrote: | Horrible color choice, cuss words (may sound stupid, but makes the thing seem unprofessional), poor layout (all server sided hacks could simply be listed instead of making each a question), poor grammar at certain points in the text, spelling errors, etc. |
I only cussed some where around 3 times.
How is red a bad color choice?
The layout is made to mimic a roman numeral outline.
Tell me the spelling and grammar errors. Please. |
Red is too bright, it detracts from reading the text as your attention is constantly drawn to it. The layout is poor in the sense that repetitive answers are given, things that have the same answer should be grouped under a general question which envelops them, so that the answer is shown only once. Remove the cuss words and it seems more professional. Your winrar link is broken, and I'll glance at grammatical and spelling errors now.
P.S.: Red should only be used for warning messages.
Action Script should be ActionScript.
Shock wave should be Shockwave.
"can no be patched" should be "cannot be patched".
"Where is the SWF online link?" should be "What is the SWF link?"
"...you talk of..." should be "...you speak of...".
"...What is my best bet to use?" should be "What should I use?"
"...too use..." should be "...to use..."
''...it auto-manically''' should be "...it's automatically..."
"...moderators/admins..." should be "...any moderator\admin..."
"Download here. Unzip the achieve, and search for the EXE. " should be ""Download it here. Unzip the archive, and search for the EXE. " |
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Thanks, I rep you tomorrow if I remember. |
"...I rep you tomorrow..." should be "I'll rep you tomorrow..."
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the the the Master Cheater Reputation: 46
Joined: 15 Jun 2008 Posts: 429
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Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2011 10:44 pm Post subject: |
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TheIndianGuy wrote: | my heart is beating auto-manically. is this bad? | My eyes are now seeing manuallically. is this bad?
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InternetIsSeriousBusiness Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 8
Joined: 12 Jul 2010 Posts: 1269
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Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2011 10:51 pm Post subject: |
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I updated the colors to be much darker. I fixed a little bit with update log.
I added Avair's name into the update log. I haven't yet to fix all the grammar issues.
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Oblivious Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 45
Joined: 12 Mar 2008 Posts: 1732
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Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2011 10:59 pm Post subject: |
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Reporter wrote: | I updated the colors to be much darker. I fixed a little bit with update log.
I added Avair's name into the update log. I haven't yet to fix all the grammar issues. |
I made the colors darker. I fixed some of the issues, the updates are logged. I added Aviar's name in the update log. I haven't fixed all the grammar issues yet.
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bfsdbsdfbdsfb Grandmaster Cheater Reputation: 54
Joined: 06 Sep 2007 Posts: 702 Location: Oh noez.
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Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 3:12 am Post subject: |
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>Avair
oh how I laughed
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King Chezzmo Cheater Reputation: 29
Joined: 10 Nov 2009 Posts: 43
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Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 3:22 am Post subject: |
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Obro wrote: | Reporter wrote: | I updated the colors to be much darker. I fixed a little bit with update log.
I added Avair's name into the update log. I haven't yet to fix all the grammar issues. |
I made the colors darker. I fixed some of the issues, the updates are logged. I added Aviar's name in the update log. I haven't fixed all the grammar issues yet. |
I made the colours darker. I fixed some of the issues, and logged any updates. I added Aviar's name to the update log. I haven't fixed all the grammer issues yet.
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Slugsnack Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 71
Joined: 24 Jan 2007 Posts: 1857
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Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 5:46 am Post subject: |
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Freezer_Burn wrote: | Obro wrote: | Reporter wrote: | I updated the colors to be much darker. I fixed a little bit with update log.
I added Avair's name into the update log. I haven't yet to fix all the grammar issues. |
I made the colors darker. I fixed some of the issues, the updates are logged. I added Aviar's name in the update log. I haven't fixed all the grammar issues yet. |
I made the colours darker. I fixed some of the issues, and logged any updates. I added Aviar's name to the update log. I haven't fixed all the grammer issues yet. |
I'M A FAGGOT I'M A FAGGOT I'M A FAGGOT
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PunkMilitia Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: -1
Joined: 14 Jun 2007 Posts: 1270 Location: South England.
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Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 6:05 am Post subject: |
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Slugsnack wrote: | Freezer_Burn wrote: | Obro wrote: | Reporter wrote: | I updated the colors to be much darker. I fixed a little bit with update log.
I added Avair's name into the update log. I haven't yet to fix all the grammar issues. |
I made the colors darker. I fixed some of the issues, the updates are logged. I added Aviar's name in the update log. I haven't fixed all the grammar issues yet. |
I made the colours darker. I fixed some of the issues, and logged any updates. I added Aviar's name to the update log. I haven't fixed all the grammer issues yet. |
I'M A FAGGOT I'M A FAGGOT I'M A FAGGOT |
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Oblivious Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 45
Joined: 12 Mar 2008 Posts: 1732
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Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 1:34 pm Post subject: |
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Freezer_Burn wrote: | Obro wrote: | Reporter wrote: | I updated the colors to be much darker. I fixed a little bit with update log.
I added Avair's name into the update log. I haven't yet to fix all the grammar issues. |
I made the colors darker. I fixed some of the issues, the updates are logged. I added Aviar's name in the update log. I haven't fixed all the grammar issues yet. |
I made the colours darker. I fixed some of the issues, and logged any updates. I added Aviar's name to the update log. I haven't fixed all the grammer issues yet. |
>colours
YOU FUCKING NIGGER.
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InternetIsSeriousBusiness Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 8
Joined: 12 Jul 2010 Posts: 1269
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Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2011 9:12 pm Post subject: |
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Rep'd
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